"Man. Catch that sunset." Wind tugs her hair and she smiles. The air is getting cool enough to have her put on her jacket.
"Yeah. It's kind of chilly."
Comfortable. "I can't wait until the nights start to get warm again. Don't sunsets and summer just go together?" Her hands swing by her side, fingers tapping out a rhythm on her legs as they walk.
"Mhm. Summer is pretty amazing."
She glances at her companion, who is relaxed and doesn't seem to notice her tangible pleasure. "Look! The first star. Oh, let's make a wish!" She closes her eyes and tenses herself, wishing. She hears her friend laugh.
"You would say that."
She opens her eyes. "Of course I would. What did you wish for?" [Excited]
"For it to start getting warmer, haha. And that summer would come a lot faster. You?"
Pauses, then shrugs. "Pretty much the same, I guess." Slowly pulls up hands into coat pockets.
Camera continues to draw out and to the left, leaving the two to continue towards their parked cars. After saying goodbye, two engines come to life, and the vehicles travel off in separate direction. The sun is the last to leave, and darkness reigns.

5 comments:
Your sheer awesomeness excites me.
i'm curious to know if you wrote this (of course you did! :D) and if there is more.
i'm digging. :) it seems like unrequited like. lol. You use great imagery, especially putting the view point of a camera. I love love love it!
that is beautiful.
just think if we both wrote a short book...together... 'tis it be amazing! such a wonderful writer you are!
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